Creative Writing Final. The writing is a little elementary because it's a picturebook. I tried to make it an asianesque folk tale with brushstroke art. Rushed and last minute I know xD
Uuu T-T Good story and writing
That was so deep... I want to cry...;_;
so sad D:
Wow, that was one deep story, and nice atmosfere.
This story is really good! The drawings and prose go well together, and the ending is a good one...though there are some errors in the text... Anyways, it's a great story.
I like how you did this. I see a couple of typos. >_> But it's still nicely written and an interesting story. You've definitely achieve that "asianesque" feeling. (Plus the typos probably make it more Asian. )